tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13005893.post6593209250381676371..comments2023-10-30T13:54:32.624+00:00Comments on A hundred dance moves per minute: Another redone pageJohn Ahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14630706251547357904noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13005893.post-58360320554783638552014-02-04T18:52:46.246+00:002014-02-04T18:52:46.246+00:00I liked the quirkiness of the original page. At le...I liked the quirkiness of the original page. At least Erin looks like less of a jerk on the redone version.Kesthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17097808674366468013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13005893.post-44762986645963509242012-08-09T14:18:54.176+00:002012-08-09T14:18:54.176+00:00I thought the original was great, but the revision...I thought the original was great, but the revision is excellent! An improvement across the board with expressions and silhouettes and compositions and so on. All this, but it's still so nice and subtle -- <br /><br /><br />Can't wait to see it in print!Todd M.https://www.blogger.com/profile/12397808411153717550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13005893.post-54478755882836170702012-08-05T12:26:32.611+00:002012-08-05T12:26:32.611+00:00My first car was this car. A beauty of a Fiat, pai...My first car was this car. A beauty of a Fiat, painted in matt blue and covered in rust. It also needed a pump on the choke to start up. This has brought back all kinds of memories, John!Beckihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01125241436912371984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13005893.post-41157202638692811772012-08-03T19:11:40.809+00:002012-08-03T19:11:40.809+00:00Ah, I just assumed Lottie misheard. I guess half o...Ah, I just assumed Lottie misheard. I guess half of writing dialogue is making sure the reader sees the mistake as the character's and not the writer's!<br /><br />Though I did spend a shameful amount of time trying to work out what Cecile's "parrot eyes" meant.Yttrovorskhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02228898910135061793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13005893.post-36330008223477263412012-08-02T19:06:30.621+00:002012-08-02T19:06:30.621+00:00Yttrovorsk: I felt it read more like a typo than a...Yttrovorsk: I felt it read more like a typo than a joke, I like "ten per cents" better.John Ahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14630706251547357904noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13005893.post-45340152320510994382012-08-02T18:43:02.327+00:002012-08-02T18:43:02.327+00:00Ah, poor Erin, life is just one heartbreak after a...Ah, poor Erin, life is just one heartbreak after another, resigned to making Faustian bargains with children. <br /><br />At least her glasses look less buglike now, and you've gotten increasingly better at drawing cars. <br /><br /><br />I feel inclined to ask, why the change from pence to percent?Yttrovorskhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02228898910135061793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13005893.post-576086091017045202012-08-02T16:06:49.867+00:002012-08-02T16:06:49.867+00:00looking good! shame, in a way, that they car got a...looking good! shame, in a way, that they car got a recognisable brand.. I liked that mysterious non-Honda 'H'!<br /><br />PH11 LYS - BM must be set sometime in the future for this to be an old banger (also this plate would have been in the future when the strip was drawn). Even for personalised plates this would have had questions over it..<br /><br />however, P111 LYS would work, with the screw joining the first two '1's at the hip ;-)DSPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04114332287303586459noreply@blogger.com